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TOEFL Prompt V

It is widely believed that grades help motivate students to learn. In this essay, I will explain why I totally agree with this statement.

The first reason is that having a good GPA is always better than having a low GPA, which allows students to widen their opportunities to find a good high-quality job. Also, if people get a good grade they can be able to achieve their dream jobs, and that is the main reason why people want to study hard. Besides, grades are the most significant factor that encourages students to learn. If the grade does not exist, students would not have been eager to learn because there is no indicator that measures their knowledge and quality after graduation.

Another reason is that when students get a good grade. Apparently, their parents will be the first ones who will be happy and celebrate their children's achievement, due to the fact that most Asian parents want their kids to achieve the best in their life in order to be ready for the future. Parents will offer some rewards for them in exchange, and this energy will make students want to study even harder to make parents proud of themselves. However, parents must not force students to learn and build pressure on their kids. This will decrease students’ encouragement in learning and studying and might ruin their future.

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To conclude, I agree with this statement because grades allow students to find their path in the future, and that will make them conquer the goal of their life. Furthermore, not only can students make themselves happy but also create happiness for parents as a reward for their scarification.

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  1. Have you ever felt like you should have gotten a better or worse grade than you did in a class?

    Do you think that material gifts are positive incentives for students to perform well in school?

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    1. Yes, when I'm in grade 10, my grade is worse than I expected. At that time, I feel very disappointed because I study quite hard and put my effort into every class but my grades still bad.

      It depends on the students. Some students might feel encouraged, and some are not. In my opinion, getting some small gifts from parents will help me a lot, because it is telling me that they are waiting for my success.

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